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Post by silver on May 28, 2007 8:13:51 GMT -5
That's classified under depressed love, right?
I wrote a lil' rhyming poem about suicide once; jotted it down on an index card next to a doodle. 'Cept mine was about how bad it was and things will get better.
I think.
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Post by Captain Spaulding on May 28, 2007 8:15:27 GMT -5
Thank you Silver. *bows*
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Post by Captain Spaulding on May 28, 2007 8:18:05 GMT -5
Here's one I made......
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Post by Captain Spaulding on May 28, 2007 8:18:57 GMT -5
I’m trapped inside this hell So many times I’ve tried to escape But I still remain caged in this pit Help me get away from this nightmare I wish I was never born This hatred bursts out of me Rage still remains inside of me I wish you could see The dark side of me But no you don’t listen and you don’t help me I remain lingering in sorrow and agony I bleed I cry I scream I beg I plead But you still don’t listen
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Post by Captain Spaulding on May 28, 2007 8:21:24 GMT -5
Unseen I suffer Unheard I cry In agony I linger In loneliness I die
Small poem I made..
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Post by Captain Spaulding on May 28, 2007 8:23:01 GMT -5
Here's one I made..like...CENTURIES ago.....
Roses have thorns Watch the fire burn inside Love is a flame You can’t understand Your heart burns Wildly with love Yet the barrier of hate Holds you back
Roses have thorns That pierce your skin The blood drips To the floor
You cry for love To see the flame Burn within your Aching heart But love says no
Roses have thorns That pierce your skin The blood drips To the floor
You had longed for love But love had walked away From you You’ll never know love And you no longer care if you don’t
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Post by silver on May 28, 2007 8:32:47 GMT -5
You're quite welcome. I wrote a poem called 'induviduality' and turned it in for a grade. My IDIOT teacher said it was confusing and pretty much patronized me about it. Shes just all...dskhgojsdahgiuasdgjfkdgsdaSTOMPSTOMPSTOMP!!! You want to read it?
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Post by silver on May 28, 2007 8:36:23 GMT -5
I don't care if you do or not, here it is. Keep in mind the title is INDUVIDUALITY!
The rain beats, Unrelenting, On the roof Weighing down Flowers, Pooling on the ground Causing people to Stay indoors To escape the rain To keep their clothes dry Hoping for the sun to shine And dry off their cars Except for one person. Who runs in the rain. Getting soaked to the skin Finding happiness in the rain While the others With sharp stares Pray for the sun To bring them happiness
I know it isn't too great, but can you UNDERSTAND IT?
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Post by Captain Spaulding on May 28, 2007 8:52:43 GMT -5
Yes I can. People who think the sun brings happiness have never danced in the rain. Rain could respresent the opposite of happiness, and one who dances with it and thinks it's happy is either sad or down right dperesssed. Of course I understand it.
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Post by silver on May 28, 2007 8:53:47 GMT -5
No. I viewed it as happier. It's fun to dance in the rain, have you never done it?
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Post by Toyger on May 29, 2007 8:26:59 GMT -5
I get it. Ms. RIley is an idiot. We don't like her.
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Post by silver on May 29, 2007 12:56:44 GMT -5
NOOOOOOO we don't.
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Post by Captain Spaulding on Jun 1, 2007 7:49:11 GMT -5
I've danced in the rain.
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Post by Toyger on Jun 1, 2007 7:50:35 GMT -5
Fun
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Post by silver on Jun 1, 2007 7:51:23 GMT -5
I've boogie board in the rain! But this miserab;e place doesn't GET that kind of rain.
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